“YOU ARE STUPID”
“YOU ARE USELESS”
“YOUR DREAMS ARE NOTHING MORE THAN A DREAM”
These were comments that became my life
Whenever I attempted to do something
All I think is maybe I’m not cut out for this
I reached a point in my life where as I attempted to do something
I back down because I am too scared to get my hopes up for nothing
As I sit here
In a place filled with darkness
I realised that nothing I ever do would good enough to make them proud.
My efforts would be a waste of time
Cutting the umbilical cord that held us together
I realised that I am alone
In the cold
Using someone else identity
I realised that I am nothing but slave
My name seems to come when you need something
With my mistakes plastered for all to see
The words thank you and please were never common thing when it came to my needs…
Tomorrow is suppose to be an important day
But I feel like disappearing completely
Because my life in your eyes is a waste of sprem and ovaries
That I just wanted it to stop and stop for a lifetime
Life would great because nothing went to waste
And I would better off as decomposed soul…
This would be what I leave u with…
You are a brilliant writer with a brilliant soul. Never forget that.
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Thank you so much…I really appreciate it
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You’re welcome.
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Dark dark
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It was written from a dark place
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I thought so. Hope it is not as dark now.
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No,it’s not
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To be forgotten is horrible. May you continue to heal.
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I hope so too
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This is really good. Couple of spelling issues “sprem”, “suppose[d]”, but definitely my kind of poem. I’ll be checking back often.
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Thanks
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Today is the important day. Yesterday, past tense. Tomorrow is the challenge everyone has to face, glass always half full. filled with a positive outlook. Thanks for the follow.
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Thank you so much for the comment
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Welcome.
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“Cutting the umbilical cord…” Chop it and do it confidently, even if you’re scared. There is no freedom in dependence and I know life will preserve you. It wouldn’t have put you here without purpose.
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So true…Thank you so much
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Great poem!
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Thank you so much
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Excellent piece
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Thank you so much Tshepo…I really appreciate it and please take ur time to enjoy my pieces…there is no rush at all
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Such pain in this, and I feel it too (though to a lesser extent). Such beautiful writing. Please don’t give up.
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Thank you so much….but it’s life…I promise I won’t give up
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Thank you so much….but it’s life…I promise I won’t give up…I really appreciate the comment
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Aww, this breaks my heart! No child should ever…ever know this pain!
Bless your heart. No matter your beliefs, know that God loves you! I’m sorry that you felt the need to write this but I’m glad you did, especially if your words are true.
We can’t choose our inherent family but we can choose who we consider family!
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Yes,so true but I learnt that it’s part of life…I really appreciate the support and feedback from u…
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You are very welcome!
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Love and prayers as you keep writing and being the incredible person you were created to be. You are HIS child and much loved. . . .precious in His sight. And ours.
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Thank you so much…I really appreciate it the support and feedback from u
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Thank you so much…I really appreciate it the support and feedback…
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Wow…This is heavy, you can’t carry this. Breathe.. Release…
You are not forgotten.
You are Here💜
I’ve read three of your Poems, they are beautifully written straight from the the heart. Expressive from the place which you Refuse to Stay.
You have Life streaming through your veins, beating in your Heart, leaking from your Pen.
Let your Hands continue to swiftly race across the Keyboard.
Just Write.
Dream On, Set those Goals, and don’t Give Up.
There is Greatness Within you. You will make it, You will succeed!
Yonnie💜
InHisCare🙏
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Ur comment is a blessing…it reminds me to keep on pushing…it reminds me why I started writing…why I fell in love with writing in the first place…Thank you so much
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I am so very grateful to hear that! Makes my heart Glad with unspeakable joy. You are certainly welcome, it my sincere pleasure!
Yonnie💜
InHisCare🙏
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😊
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